The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/10
I really enjoyed the old-fashion feel to it. The idea of feuding families for centuries being put to a stop by a letter is so noble, if only the world leaders could do that more often.
04/20/10
I really like the verse of Ecclesiastes as it relates to the topic. Your story is fascinating. I felt totally immersed in the time and place. Nice work!
04/22/10
Nice job. As always Karen, your pen delivers an elegance of grace about various cultures and times, which trancends to us all.
04/22/10
Your research and your details live and breathe with total credibility, without diverting us from the central thrust of your story. Very well done.