The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the old-fashion feel to it. The idea of feuding families for centuries being put to a stop by a letter is so noble, if only the world leaders could do that more often.
04/20/10
I really like the verse of Ecclesiastes as it relates to the topic. Your story is fascinating. I felt totally immersed in the time and place. Nice work!
Nice job. As always Karen, your pen delivers an elegance of grace about various cultures and times, which trancends to us all.
04/22/10
Your research and your details live and breathe with total credibility, without diverting us from the central thrust of your story. Very well done.