The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story!
Creative POV. I was there all the way, and it must have felt like a sword in the heart.
Wow! You did a fantastic job. I really liked the courage you showed by not tying it into a neat little bow. The conflict was riveting and held my interest throughout. Outstanding work.
totally kept my attentiong through out. Wow, sad story though. Touched my heart.
Well told.
04/20/10
A great entry for sure.
Your ability to write stories that create sympathy for your characters is very evident. I felt complete compassion for all those involved. Your story line also shows the power of words for good or ill - if others only truly understood this basic truth, how much better a world this would be.
04/20/10
Oh :( Gripping, sad… You really fire-up the emotions in your reader with this. Well done!
So sad, so real. Good writing.
Wow, what a gripping story about the power of words!