The Official Writing Challenge
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Magnificent story--not only for plot, but also for the poetic descriptions.
04/15/10
Very well written, a pleasure to read. Loved your title phrase, "should your paths cross".
04/17/10
Oh, I was hoping it would be his brother... (will he receive mercy?) ... probably not.. (but I can hope) I loved your descriptions, from the sunlight to the wisteria (my favorite flower, by the way, and it's just starting to bloom here). I love your title. Your story is wonderful!
Great plot and good descriptions. I thought the brother had died until the end. Hope this spy survived too.
04/18/10
Marvelous twist. One imagines a completely different story line until the end. Well done.
04/20/10
Oh, so good. Amazing plot line, great descriptions. Loved it!
04/20/10
Great Title!

I love the ending. It was a pleasnt surprise.

It's easy to see what separates the Masters from the wanabes.

As a beginner, I can honestly state, that I have received such inspiration in one month from Faith Writers like yourself and others that I am in AWE!

God bless you!
Thanks.
Wow, excellent story, so well written. I only hope one day maybe I could write as well as this. Your discriptions are so wonderful and an awesome twist. It kept me on edge the whole time.