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I enjoyed the way this poem was written. I got the message.
Very powerful words.
04/18/10
Loved the wonderful progression of thought and truth. Two minor glitches: "Chose" should be "choose", and "steal" should be "steel." Small things in light of how very BIG this poem is in its depth. Good job!
04/20/10
I love your title and the poem is lovely. The typos I noticed have been mentioned already, so I'll say simply: well done!
04/23/10
Terry, congrats on placing in the top fifteen in Level 3!

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