The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Oooh, good story. Poignant & well-written. Good example of "Show, don't tell."
09/05/05
Kept me on the edge of my seat, good job.
09/06/05
Yup, a good one. Sucked me right in and kept me reading.
09/07/05
oooh, gives me chill bumps! You did a very good job of slowly making us realize where we were...

Nicely written. Well done!
09/10/05
Extremely creative! You did a marvelous job of creating a dark atmosphere, and your narrator's growing fears. Really good writing. (If you're ever going to publish it, you'll need to change the title; there was a movie called "Postcards from the Edge in 1990." Great minds, huh?)
09/20/05
Bill, just a really quick note to let you know that this terrific entry was in the semi-finals for the Postcard challenge. It's great to see you entering and really doing so well! Love, Deb