The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/10
Timely. Relevant. Hopeful. Victorious.

I liked the progression of your poem.
This so reminds me of the works of classical masters in this field of poetry and thought such as Goethe. It added a totally new dimension to my day today - thank-you!
04/15/10
Parts of this are chilling, and parts are a warning, but the ending "truth" shines! Excellent work!!
04/15/10
Excellent entry and precisely fits the topic.
04/16/10
I thoroughly enjoyed this powerful and concise poem. I like the way you ended with the ultimate victory of God's Word.
04/16/10
Amen. Well done.
Very powerful words.
You are indeed a master poet.
Very interesting rhyme scheme and meter. aa,bbb. Perfect flow. I give it a 10!
04/17/10
Well done—a truth well expressed.
04/20/10
Beautifully written!

For those of us who aspire to soar on poetic wings, this is pure inspiration!!

Thank you.