The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/10
This is out of the egg...I mean, out of the box:) Cute story.
Since I am a critter lover, always enjoy an animals POV. The Gossiping Crows were pretty darn cute.
03/22/10
I had to laugh at "he was relegated to the back row when the Dawn Chorus welcomed the sun. It had been suggested to him that perhaps he should just mime to the words…" I loved the reminder that "when one of them fell to the ground, the Creator knew about it." This was fun to read and had a lot of Biblical truth in it!
03/23/10
Hank is a bird I think I could be friends with! Wonderful character, and so many delicious details in this story!
03/24/10
I think I sit next to Frank. Great, cute, entertaining story. God bless.