Home Read What's New Join
My Account Login

Read Our Devotional             2016 Opportunities to be Published             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge



how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level


submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners

Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.



how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Wow! (03/11/10)

TITLE: Employee of the Year
By Delores McCarter


Mr. Hamilton was tired of seeing a mess in the kitchen. Every day, people would leave things in the sink. It was a single sink tub with a faucet and sprayer. It was not equipped with a garbage disposal. That fact didn’t discourage people from tossing garbage in the sink, leaving a mess for someone else to clean up.

One day, someone actually poured coffee grounds down the drain. Mr. Hamilton saw maintenance heading to the kitchen too many times. He found himself unloading the dishwasher more than a few times, which was not easy to do with his bad knees. One of his employees, Tonya Banks, took it upon herself to clean the kitchen. It was not her job and Mr. Hamilton wanted to praise her for her efforts.

Every morning, Tonya headed to the kitchen for her morning coffee. She managed to always get there shortly after a few employees filled the sink with dirty coffee cups or disgusting oatmeal bowls. Mr. Hamilton vented his frustration to his staff without much change. He just left it alone for awhile. As a business owner, had a company to run, reports to generate, tours of the plant, meetings with city officials. He was fed up with complaining about a dirty kitchen. After all, these folks were adults.

Finally, some posted a sign above the sink:

“Please be courteous to others and clean up your own mess.”

The sign worked for two days.

Mr. Hamilton thought of another approach. While his employees went about their regular routine of putting coffee cups and oatmeal bowls in the sink every morning, stacking dirty salad bowls and microwave dishes in the sink at lunchtime, and placing used coffee pots on the counter at the end of the day, Mr. Hamilton did not say anything. He saw it all from his office. He knew that Tonya was the main person cleaning the kitchen.

One day, after their annual office pot luck, the kitchen was left with a big mess. The bottom of the sink was covered with salad leaves. Cookies and cake crumbs were all over the kitchen counter. Strange smears of food covered the counter and sink faucet. It was disgusting. Again, he held his tongue.

The next morning, Mr. Hamilton entered the kitchen and noticed the kitchen was sparking clean. The microwave, toaster, fridge, and sink were spotless. The glass coffee pots were clear as crystal and there was not a bread crumb, coffee ground or salad leaf to be found.

The next day, he called his staff in for a meeting.

“I have started an Employee of the Year award and Tonya will be the first recipient. She is commended for her tireless efforts of going beyond the call of duty.”

She walked up to shake hands with Mr. Hamilton and get her photo taken.

“The reward for this year is a $1,000 cash bonus, three months free parking, and season tickets to the college football games.”

Tonya opened the envelope and pulled out the big check.

“Within twelve months, there were seventeen calls to maintenance for a clogged drain. You are all college graduates. It shouldn’t take long to figure out that we don’t have a garbage disposal. Toss your garbage in the trash can. You can’t miss it because you pass right by the trash on your way into the kitchen.”

A few employees laughed.

“Tonya is an employee here, but she is not your maid. If you use a cup, wash it. If you make a mess, clean it up. I better not see one more cup or one more dish in that sink. For goodness sake, if you don’t want to wash it, use the dishwasher!”

Silence followed his little speech as the guilty parties held their heads down.

"Tonya was chosen as employee of the year primarily in how she took it upon herself to clean the kitchen. She is a problem solver and for that, she is relieved from cleaning that kitchen again. I don’t care of the toaster is on fire, the coffee pots are overflowing, or the suds are coming out of the dishwasher. From this moment on, everyone better clean up behind themselves or they would have to answer to me! Now, let’s congratulate Tonya Banks for all of her hard work!”

The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
Accept Jesus as Your Lord and Savior Right Now - CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.

This article has been read 293 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Beth LaBuff 03/20/10
LOL! I LOVE that Tonya won the "employee of the year award" (it kinda makes me want to make sure my kitchen is clean :) ) You've made this so enjoyable…and I think most of us can learn a lesson from it. Very nice!
AnneRene' Capp03/22/10
Unexpected rewards for going above and beyond. Great message and I also, lol. That poor boss must have been ready to pull his hair out. Not to mention, there just isn't an excuse for being a slob! :)