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03/19/10
Nice descriptions with characters and all. It put me their.
03/20/10
Engaging story! I was totally engrossed. I enjoyed the restaurant, the smells, from the seven-year-old, and the contrast to the MC with his own family. ...and then your "Mr. Paul!" and how you unfolded his story. Super creative work on this story. Wonderful writing! Wow!
03/22/10
I enjoyed this so much. You did a great job with your descriptions. I could even imagine the noise from the hustle and bustle inside the restaurant. I was so glad to see Mr. Paul still at the restaurant. I was afraid he'd passed on by the time you returned. :)
03/26/10
Renee, congrats on placing in the top fifteen of Level 3! Be sure to check out the highest rankings on the forums:

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