The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Things we need to pass on. Had to read this a couple of times, as the sudden shift in the final paragraphs and the run-on caught me off guard - thanks for this interesting story.
09/06/05
Very nice. I could definately relate to tired and worried mom. It did get confusing after the shift though.
09/10/05
I can hear and smell the beach in this story--well-done!
11/26/05
Awesome; brilliant; and enlightening. Makes me wonder WHY I even bother to write - you're a talented writer and I was mesmerized throughout!