The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/10
Your title drew me, and I wasn't even familiar with the Job verse. I love how it's the them of this story, and carries through to the lovely last line. This has the feel of a true story. Great job.
First of all, I was very intrigued by the title of this story but I had no idea it would take me where it did. Thank you for sharing this experience. What an awesome verse and how wonderful that God showed it to you right when you needed it so that you could share it right when your little church congregation needed it! I totally get it!!!

Excellent story, well-written. Excited for what God has in store for your community.
03/19/10
I love the title, and you did a great job telling the story, showing the Spirit at work.
03/21/10
Excellent use of scripture within the story and, I'm sure, will be an encouragement to many. It was to me!!
03/24/10
Perfect final line. Thanks for sharing this.