The Official Writing Challenge
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I was hoping to get some splendid descriptions in a story when you first started it. I did like the saying, "Building Paper Bridges." Nice.
Well at the risk of sounding like "Bill and Ted"...Most Excellent! I like everything about this. :)
04/16/10
Neat story, however, I'm partial to poetic rhymed poetry. The prose did tell a story of "what might have gone wrong" and had some very good thoughts. A truly enjoyable read. Short and to the point! Well done!
06/11/10
Good stuff. Made me stop and think to digest the words.