The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/10
I enjoy your descriptive style: "...we felt every stone prick the bottom of our feet on our way back..." and other word pictures that add extra life to the entry.
The closing poem was also very good, though at first I wondered how Mt Everest, Shakespeare and Broadway fitted into the story.
03/19/10
Felt like I was right there beside Cleopas and the MC and I agree...the ancient empty tomb is the greatest WOW!

Also, liked your poem...ALOT!
03/25/10
Very well done biblical piece, a little polishing and it would have made top place. Good job, Stan, keep it up.
03/30/10
Very cleverly done. Congratulations!!