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03/19/10
You've related so well the lengths people go to searching for fulfillment, as well as the eventual let-downs. I'm sure many can relate to this. And it's so true...He is there all the time.
03/19/10
This reminded me of Ecclesiastes. Enjoyed your work.
03/21/10
So true of the futile search for hope without God. Very eloquently written.
03/21/10
I also thought it was a modern take on Solomon's reflections through Ecclesiastes. I felt that "Illusive" at the beginning could have been coupled with "elusive," but you spelled that out as you progressed.