The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful tribute to servicemen everywhere. This was well-written and brought a tear to my eye. Fantastic point!
03/16/10
Very nice. :) I had to reread the first couple of paragraphs to figure out who was who, but I think that was due to my tiredness! :) I liked the ending. Good message!
03/18/10
Excellent writing skills and story telling. Congrats on EC placement.
03/18/10
Excellent creativity! Congrats on your Editor's Choice!
03/18/10
Each stream of events flowed separately . . . as one. Just love it, when I am fully engaged in two parallels, either one of which is strong enough to be a stand alone. Satisfying closing, given the word-count restraint.

Congratulations, Patricia, on your - creativity enhancing meaning - 1st Place Win .

Bryan.
03/18/10
Wow! How'd you do that? Awesome writing, Pat. Love it! Huge Congratulations!!
03/18/10
Congratulations on your first place win! Great story, great writing!
03/18/10
Patricia, congrats on your first place and EC!