The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/10
Although I am not a golfer, I loved your descriptions. Good use of words patterns, nice flow.
03/11/10
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme. Very fun to read out loud and listen to the play of words.
I was chuckling at the end of the first two lines -- really well done meter and rhyme woven into a fun view of golf.
HMMM? You must have followed me on the golf course before? I get my moneys worth, because I use alot of real estate.
03/16/10
Although I'm not a golfer, I've walked around various courses often enough to see many "teed off" golfers. And I've made the mistake of asking my husband how his day on the greens went! Very amusing poem. I liked it!
03/18/10
I am a golfer and loved every line of this. Congrats on EC placement!
03/18/10
LOL! Creative and well-written with a great poetic format! Super congrats on Editor's Choice!
03/18/10
I'm grinning ear to ear. Delightful! Congrats on your EC, Vincent!
03/19/10
This is great. I think I'll have to send this to a friend of mine. Congratulatiosn on your win!