The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way you presented this,great format. Each card had its own special message and brought me into the overall story. Thank you.
Very creative! Made me reall think what it would be like to live in China.
Suppose everyone's experience of China is different. Wasting away living on rice - urgh! Anyway, nicely done. I really do like your work and learn a lot from it.
You did a nice job of showing and not telling. I could smell the oily-garlic apartment... and hear all the sounds of the street below!
Buddha? Give yourself a break! Loved every post card! Hope to hear more.
I really liked this: the writer of the postcards has a wonderful, witty voice. I think it'd be even better without the last paragraph. Your postcards tell the story beautifully.
Well done Suz, I really liked this!
God Bless, Karen
Congratulations Suz! A succinct and creative way to orient your newcomers to the Orient – and you didn’t think this would place! The postcards have a delightful natural style and are informative without ‘info dumping.’ Love not being able to find a place for your foot. How crowded is that!
Just leaving a Congrats! 3rd Place. So proud of you. Keep the good work coming!
Wonderful! Thanks for the chuckles. Is this a true story?
Well done, Suz! Creative and enjoyable. A well-deserved win.
Wonderforful my friend. great writing. Sorry I have not been on line just came home from 8 days in hospital. I hope you received my email.

Kathy C