The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/10
I enjoyed this story--could visualize the puppy wiggling his way between the couple. Cute ending.
03/14/10
LOL....I consider myself fairly warned now, and I'll watch my step whenever I visit. :) On a semi-serious note, it's a really cute story; very well done. And I'm with ya - definitely not an animal person!
03/14/10
I so enjoyed this and continue to smile as I am writing this. I am a critter lover and absolutely adore Basset's. Your story was very easy to feel like I was there with you.
03/14/10
Loved Abby's "voice." With a puppy in the house, you'll be a pet lover soon! Couldn't live without one! Great story.
03/14/10
This is so funny. I enjoyed the dog voice in particular.
03/14/10
Great story! Reminded me of when I was a teenager, and we had two small dogs. When my boyfriend came over, one dog would get between us on the couch, and the other, on the opposite side of my boyfriend! I think I still have the picure that my mom took of the 4 of us!
03/15/10
Very well written. Loved the "voice" of the puppy. Could see her worming in on the couple. Good job!
03/15/10
Very cute and entertaining story with a good messaage. The dog thoughts threw me a lil with POV shifts, but wasn't confusing. Enjoyed it. God bless.
03/15/10
Loved the interaction between the three and Abby's voice. Her thought at the end was perfect, lol!
03/15/10
Oh, how cute! I love the puppy-thoughts. And our doggie does the same when we get lovey-dovey. She's a VERY jealous doggie. Great ending!
03/16/10
Too precious! I had to stop a couple of times to make sure I had the right POV, but overall, I love this. Dogs are my weakness!
03/16/10
I am not a dog lover, but this is just too cute!
03/17/10
Evie is so cute. I can't wait to meet her in person. Just don't make me clean up her messes, okay? LOL.
03/17/10
Awww, those gorgeous brown eyes just melt your heart. I'll take her if you get tired of her. Great story of a boy and his dog. Okay, a man and his clever canine who knows exactly what to do. Loved reading this.
03/17/10
:) Great work on this totally enjoyable story! P.S. Good luck in the future... you will have plenty of material for future entries. :)