The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful. You made this look so easy. The rhyming sequence was fantastic, but it read with such ease. I am in awe of your talent and blessed by your message. Bravo!
Absolutely enjoyed this. Loved the consistent flow and especially how you used so many different examples. Great Poem, Great message.
Joan, Joan, Joan :)
This is a really powerful and well written poem. I like how you take scenes from all over the Bible and weave them into your poem. Well done!
03/16/10
Loved the undertones to this and the journey through to today. Great!
03/17/10
You have a nicely worked poem, great meter, well-thought-out, and a wonderful message. Your poetic format is impressive. Very nice work!
MOST EXCELLENT!! On the edge of tears at the end of this one. I don't think it a far stretch to imagine the Lord saying, "Well done, good and faithful servant" for this writing. :-)
Awesome. This is hauntingly beautiful. What a summary of the bible and the message - all in one poem! Keep writing - you have a very special gift.