The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/10
Great job creating a hmpf moment and strong characterization--even better when you brought in dialogue in the second half. I could relate to Amanda's nonconfrontational, people-pleasing personality. Nice work.
Awww rats! I wanted to see the rose thorns hit Mrs. Chambers fair on her snooty snoot!

I'm glad Michael realised what was happening, and who was responsible.
One day Mrs. Chambers will get her comehmphpance.

Good story, enjoyed it a lot.
03/13/10
Hooray for Michael, definitely a keeper! Very engaging, all the way through.
03/17/10
I love this. I especially like this groom. I feel sorry for the poor bride and her future with such a mother-in-law. You really drew me into your story.
03/17/10
LOL! Poor Amanda… I had to smile at the bouquet being tossed early. This is very creative to the topic (and perfect!) I enjoyed it! :)
03/17/10
Very well written and suspenseful story.