The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/10
This flowed wonderfully. I held onto every word. I really liked the ending. Nice message, one that many of us need to hear.
03/13/10
A smart woman with an agenda! I kinda like that!
Very enjoyable read!
03/14/10
Loved it!!!
03/15/10
A sensational climax. You fooled me completely. Loved it!
03/15/10
Ah...smart woman. I like the fact that she reached out to him in this sneaky way actually longing to be his friend. A lot can be learned when the younger ones admire AND respect their predecessors. Good job.
03/16/10
Your cleverly written story brings the old and young to life so well that the reader gets to peer through the window at their meeting.
03/16/10
Awww, what a clever and sweet gal.
03/18/10
Congratulations on being #1!
03/18/10
Love your creativity with the topic, Carol. Super congrats on your double-placing..1st in Masters/1st place Editor's Choice!
03/18/10
As smooth as silk...or the coffee in the story. truly well written and sweet.

Mona
03/18/10
Congratulations! I wasn't able to read very many before. I'm sorry I missed this one. Very sincere with an easy pace to allow the reader to enjoy each element and word picture. God bless.
03/18/10
Congrats on your well-deserved win!
03/18/10
What a wonderful, seamless piece of writing. Love it! HUGE CONGRATS, Carol.
03/18/10
Wonderful flow - wonderful message and ending. Very creative too. Congratulations on 1st place and EC!
03/18/10
You so captured the essence of humph! Wonderful piece...congratulations on your well deserved win! :)
03/18/10
This Laurel's got it going on. I LOVE the twisty ending, and your characters spring to life. Congrats, Carol - awesomely written story!
03/18/10
I loved this. You certainly deserved the placement. Congratulations!
03/18/10
This made me smile. Congratulations. I love this entry. :)
03/19/10
Excellent surprise ending. A well deserved first place!
03/19/10
The woman was not only good looking - she was definitely wise beyond her paycheck. Great story! Congratulations!
03/20/10
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03/21/10
Congrats Carol. I loved the characters you created here, the title and the entire flow of the story. Beautiful!