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It's in a great devotion form. it sounded a little preachy to me, I wished you had shown me by your characters actions.

But it is a lesson everyone needs to hear at least once in their lives. You did an excellent job tying the scripture into your message.

Your prayer was beautiful and very heartfelt.
03/14/10
You brought up a convicting point - so many don't use such opportunities to pray for others. I agree it's a little preachy; you can slip the message within a story or recollection. Nicely done devotional.
Excellent message! Such a need for one such as this and it is the first time I have seen it addressed. I prayed your prayer and feel very blessed to have been a partaker in your article!
Good food for thought. Thank you.
03/15/10
This is a great lesson! I feel the beginning paragraphs could be condensed quite a bit - it seems redundant - but from there it's an outstanding devotion and a good message for ALL to meditate on.
03/17/10
Living the Christian life is not always easy and involves work, at times. You have a challenging message. Very nice!
You did a good job of pointing out a lot of issues in a short devotional format, and summarizing it well at the end.