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03/11/10
I liked the description that made me feel as if I were watching the scene along with your MC. I was also glad you didn't write the ending that I thought you would, with the angry man coming so easily to the Lord. It can take a lot of time for the Holy Spirit to work on people like that because of their stubborn resistance to turn away from what they believe is the truth. So thank you for the more believable ending. Of course, every encounter with the truth plants and waters seeds and, who knows what will come of it.
03/13/10
A very thought-provoking story, well written. Maintained my interest throughout. Well done!
03/16/10
Wow - so powerful. What a perfect title, and your descriptions are absolutely vivid and inviting (that's probably not the right word).