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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Hmph! (03/04/10)

TITLE: When God Doesn't Say "Hmph!"
By Donna Emery


Hello, God? Itís Earth Lee Wisdom here. You said I could call on You whenever I have a problem. Well, thereís definitely a problem here. As You know, the Jews have been slaves in Egypt for quite some time here, and we need someone to be a spokesperson to the Pharoah; so heíll let Your people go.

Whatís the problem? Well, You only have one man selected for the job: a guy named Moses Ė and I canít hire him. Moses has a real anger management problem, a questionable national origin, and a speech impediment. Surely; we canít have a man like that doing such an important job. OhÖ heís the one You chose? Well, if You say soÖ.

Hello, God? Itís Earth Lee Wisdom again. I have another predicament. You know Israel needs a new king. Saul was a good looking young soldier and he was popular when the people chose him, but he isnít getting the job done. So, we need a new king and You seem to have written down the wrong name for this job. David? The youngest son of Jesse? You want him Ė not one of his brothers? You want a psalm-writing shepherd to be King? I know he did a great job with that lucky shot to kill Goliath, but most people around here agree; that must have been fixed. Well, OKÖYou must see something in Him; if You call him ďa man after Godís own heartĒÖ.

Hello, God? Earth Lee Wisdom, checking in. I havenít questioned Your choices for centuries, but this one canít be right. We need a man who can carry the Good News to the Jews and to the uttermost parts of the earth. Well, yes, You did make a decisionĖ but he canít be the right man. After all, Saul of Tarsus is a sanctimonious zealot and tentmaker Ė and heís personally responsible for the deaths of countless of Your followers. I hear heís changed his name to Paul and changed his heart to serve You; but how can You think heíll be accepted by the believers whose families heís persecuted? Well, after all Ė it is up to You.

It seems as if Your way of selecting workers is far different than mine. If I look at this through my own eyes, it seems as though You always chose unqualified people to do Your Will. But then, when all was said and done, it all came out right. I just donít understand.

But, then againÖ if it were my choice, Iíd never sacrifice the life of my only son for men and women who donít deserve that sacrifice. Yet, You let Your Son become sin for us Ė in order to give everyone Your free gift of eternal life.

So, I guess I'm glad You're the One Who does the choosing. That way, anyone who trusts in You has a chance to do Your will.

But You knew that all along, didn't You?

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Joanne Sher 03/13/10
Clever piece - and fun. Love the voice!
Jackie Wilson03/13/10
What a neat voice - Earth Lee Wisdom! Very creative piece!
Donna Wolther03/15/10
A good reminder of how God works and well-written and fun too.
Charla Diehl 03/17/10
I enjoyed this fun and Biblical take on the topic. Good reminder to each of us that God is in control.