The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/10
I read this out loud to my husband who didn't have any trouble hearing and laughing in the right spots. This was fun to read. I have to say that I started liking Henry more than I liked Wilma. Wilma seemed like a constantly grumpy person and I honestly wanted to like her a little more than I did.
03/12/10
In addition to the great dialog, I like the little details you added throughout that enhanced the story. Great fun to read!
03/15/10
This is so funny. I'm still chuckling. Thanks for starting my day with a good laugh (and the undertones of health care reform is excellent, my husband would appreciate that one!)
03/15/10
This was such a fun read - I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great dialogue & the characters really come alive. Well done!
03/15/10
Very heart warming story, great dialogue and well written. Enjoyed all of the humor and the Reverend taking time to visit this adorable, elderly and homebound couple.
03/15/10
Wonderfully drole. I particularly enjoyed Wilma's character. I felt the Rev was a little wooden but nonetheless well-meaning. Good stuff.
03/15/10
I liked all of the characters and the story line too. I think this is one of the best this time.
03/16/10
And now I've had my laugh for the day with your delightful story.
03/17/10
I love the title... and great characters. A fun read for sure.
03/17/10
Great fun! sounded real, you caught the feeling just right.
03/17/10
Can I just use one word to sum this up? HILARIOUS! Love it!
03/17/10
I really can't add anything to what everyone else has said. Except, I laughed just as much the second time I read it as I did the first. Well done Bryan, well done!
03/17/10
LOL! Your humor brought a smile to my face. Great characterization of both Henry and Wilma. :)
03/17/10
Enjoyed it much also, and was impressed with how smoothly it flowed -- an easy and VERY fun read!
03/18/10
Enjoyable read as I've come to expect from you. Something about these old couples that is so endearing. Very solid entry.
Mona