The Official Writing Challenge
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Short and to the point. I had to laugh out loud at the dilemma the husband found himself in. Next time, it would be worth the wait to stand in line for the good food. Very amusing.
03/17/10
To misquote Sherlock Holmes:
"Alimentary, my dear Watson!"
Good tight writing that adds warmth and humour to the tension. Very well done.
03/17/10
I enjoyed this glimpse into your honeymoon. Your humor made this so enjoyable. :) Congrats on 25 years…that's awesome!