The Official Writing Challenge
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So typically teen-aged. That selfish stage is worse than the terrible twos. You did a good job describing it.
Engaging interaction between two teenage girls and descriptively accurate. Your dialogue kept my attention. The ending left me hanging a bit, as I would have liked to have seen the mother and daughter interact at the mall, coming to a better understanding of what each was going through. :)
03/18/10
Congrats on your 6th place, Phee!