The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute story, I was expecting her to be vindicated, by a great reason to fight. I'm so happy you didn't go that route.

Tiny typo contract instead of contrast. But that was minor next to the great lesson you shared about how important it is for a parent to follow through.

I often want to rescind a punishment too, so I could empathize with the mother.
03/13/10
Good dialogue, kept me engaged. Someone really needs to package elbow grease, it would probably do well!