The Official Writing Challenge
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True story?
Looks like your article contracted that "weird letter virus, I've heard mentioned", but no matter, was able to read this anyway. Entertaining ordeal and like how you portrayed what you men go through for your wives! Especially liked your sentence with the helium balloon. lol
A fun account, with great descriptions.
Great description. I could picture the possum in its humiliating flight out of the yard. The last line was priceless. A fun story.
The last line was hysterical. good job.
Ha, way funny. Loved it. Some great bits and a super story. Likeed it when he got kicked out of bed. God bless.
Some great analogies here. I particularly loved the golfing allusion. And the reference to the bar of soap was a great way to express his all too human irritation.
Ha, ha! :) This had me smiling, "two booming tenors spending considerable time sucking on a helium balloon." I was hoping the neighbor didn't have dogs that would start barking at the opposum in their yard. :) Love your ending! :)
I liked the suspenseful beginning... and, of course, the great opossum battle! We once had a problem with opossums coming up on our porch to eat the outdoor kitty's food, so I can really relate to this. A fun read!
Congratulations on the top 40!