The Official Writing Challenge
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A darling poem that I enjoyed with a big smile.
A very sweet poem, feels like a classic nursery rhyme. Sometimes the meter feels a little off (eg. 3rd stanza)
I agree with the comment above - had the feel of a nursery rhyme. Young children would love this cute poem! You might try clapping out the rhythm so you have matching syllable count for matching lines.