The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this poem and have to agree there shan't be need to use words like these in the heavenly after-life, good job
This was very smooth to read not mention clever.
As for eek, don't even think it should be a word on earth...I mean really, who actually says it? :)
03/08/10
The message I get from your lovely poem is that there are no surprises and there is no fear when we belong to Him. I like this.
What a clever application of the topic. I never thought about "eek" denoting rejection, shock, banishment, etc., but I do now. Great poem, filled with depth and beautiful truth.
03/09/10
You're right! There is no "Eek" in Heaven, and I couldn't even find it in the dictionary either. (*.*)! But this poetic message says it "Like It Is!" Nicely done.