The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
From a true country girl from birth I must say I found your story hysterical. I loved the thought of turning your house into a Disney house. It was quite cute.
03/07/10
Very cute and clever. You did much better than I would have with Jiminy! Your descriptions within the story are great.
03/08/10
Favorite lines: "cricket the size of a Chihuahua"; "Mickey was giving his George Foreman impression in the corner". Fun writing, fun story!
03/08/10
I too enjoyed the Disneyland analogy -- a great concept.
03/09/10
Very cleverly woven! I loved the way you worded this, "What I hadn’t anticipated was the fauna below the flora..." I also enjoyed the Disney characters, especially Jiminy and Pluto! :)
03/10/10
Ah, city folk. Great read.
03/10/10
Funny, and you've captured the Disney-eyed lack of reality perfectly.
03/10/10
Cute ending. I loved all of your references to the Disney characters, it really made them come to life for me.
03/11/10
It took me a moment or two to get the "Disney connection," but I am a little slow in the morning with just one cup of coffee down. Funny, bright, and creative.
03/11/10
Congratulations on the top 40!
03/11/10
Ooh! This was thoroughly enjoyable. Congrats on the place too!