The Official Writing Challenge
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What an exciting suspenseful story. It kept me at the edge of my seat.
Great writing. I was truly caught up in this story. Think my eyes may have even been bugging out as I was reading! Hope there is a sequel.
03/08/10
Definitely feels like a snippet out of a larger work. Left me with a lot of questions. The authentic feel of the German setting makes me wonder if the author really did her homework with research, or he or she is from Germany? It'll be fun to find out, and also to have the story continued. :)
Congratulations on the top 40!