The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/10
This is positively priceless. It would make a great devotion or an article in a woman's magazine. I'd love to have every female who doubts herself read this.
03/07/10
Cute story for all women. Loved the half curled Lip!
03/08/10
Your story is too true. I can only imagine that each of us "girls" has felt particularly unattractive at some time. But I love your conclusion. Indeed, we are beautiful--loved by God--made in his image. Thanks for the reminder.
03/08/10
I'm sure this would resonate with every girl and woman. We all need to see ourselves through God's eyes. So glad you do. Blessings.
03/09/10
I think this was a brave entry and well done.

One word that didn't quite jive was the word "endearing". I suppose it was meant to be sarcastic? but for me it wasn't the very best choice.

That last sentence is really powerful!

God bless you, Sarah! Thanks for your encouragement. :)
03/09/10
Perfect title! You have a fun beginning that unfolds into your beautiful message. I like this!
03/10/10
Your point is wonderful, and needs to be shared, for sure. I thought it a bit short - like you could definitely spend more words on this one. Were you practicing present tense? You kept it well throughout the piece. I also thought the conclusion cut off too quickly and didn't hit me all that hard. Your approach to the topic is certainly unique, though - one I didn't think of. Well done!
03/10/10
It's a wonderful message, told within a story I can relate to. But I would have liked you to dig a little deeper - tell me more about the scripture and God's love.
03/10/10
What an encouragement to women everywhere. What does it matter when you are a daughter of the Lord.
03/10/10
I think everyone can relate to this (in the morning, and at other times, too :). I always enjoy reading what you write! Good job.
03/19/10
Wow, this was good. I really enjoyed it. What a blessing to see yourself as God Sees you.