The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the ending. It's amazing what we'll do for our kids.
03/04/10
Just darling! Loved the super-hero references.
The characters in this are so perfectly cast and personable. Great job of showing a neat mother/daughter relationship. Story drew me in and kept my interest, with smiles, throughout.
03/10/10
LOL! I love how you put the reader into the super-hero moment by referring to your "cape/robe" and "X-ray vision".. I really enjoyed this!
03/10/10
Very cute and well written. Great reader involvement. I hate spiders too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God bless.