The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story well told. I really liked that fact that the mouse was thankful too. Nice twist.
03/04/10
You have cleverly woven different perspectives into this, and shown enor-mouse skill. Well done.
03/04/10
The flow of this story was fantastic, the style was totally consistent from start to finish. Awesome!
03/06/10
Neat story. Some editing on punctuation would make this story read a little smoother and clearer; plus improve the chances of it being spoken of as a Masterpiece...thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Cute story - nicely done!
03/09/10
Best mouse/rat/critter story of the week! Loved the style, flow, setting, and the two POV's flowing through.