The Official Writing Challenge
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Ohh what a heart wrenching story. So beautifully told. I liked how how sneaked the eek in. It was perfect.
03/04/10
Great job telling this story, with a very intimate feel.
Beautiful story.
03/05/10
Uh, uh...this brought tears to my eyes as I remembered how I sat next to my wife as she underwent chemotherapy for breast cancer. Beautifully done.
03/06/10
A very touching story written masterfully with suspence and passion - intertwined with bewilderment (for the reader to sort out)...but keeping the reader's interest until the very end. Well done!
03/08/10
Lauren's mother isn't the only one with tears in her eyes. This is absolutely beautiful. I cannot imagine a more fitting analogy for heaven than an early recess. Precious story - I hope it ranks way at the top come Thursday morning!
Congratulations for placing in the top 40. Good job.
03/11/10
Congratulations on your EC placing! Well deserved!
03/12/10
Lisa, this is inspired! I hope this gets wide coverage because I believe it could encourage so many in our world. Fantastic job. So well written.