The Official Writing Challenge
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Ohh what a heart wrenching story. So beautifully told. I liked how how sneaked the eek in. It was perfect.
03/04/10
Great job telling this story, with a very intimate feel.
Beautiful story.
03/05/10
Uh, uh...this brought tears to my eyes as I remembered how I sat next to my wife as she underwent chemotherapy for breast cancer. Beautifully done.
03/06/10
A very touching story written masterfully with suspence and passion - intertwined with bewilderment (for the reader to sort out)...but keeping the reader's interest until the very end. Well done!
Lauren's mother isn't the only one with tears in her eyes. This is absolutely beautiful. I cannot imagine a more fitting analogy for heaven than an early recess. Precious story - I hope it ranks way at the top come Thursday morning!
Congratulations for placing in the top 40. Good job.
03/11/10
Congratulations on your EC placing! Well deserved!
03/12/10
Lisa, this is inspired! I hope this gets wide coverage because I believe it could encourage so many in our world. Fantastic job. So well written.