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09/05/05
Troubling...the transition threw me a little. Thanks for the interesting essay.
09/06/05
Well, not a feel-good article... but writen nicely none the less... thank you for sharing your gift with us!
09/08/05
The transition threw me too, but the tears were pricking nonetheless...
09/08/05
Very, very sad, and very, very well-written.
I'm guessing that Joshua is the daughter's husband? Well written and interesting but I was a little confused at times. Perhaps a few more sentences to link the paragraphs would make it flow for the reader.
09/12/05
Love your opening paragraph, Deb. Really set the scene well. The story is so sad for the mother. Horrible to work through surviving your kids. One blow following another and there is only One to cling to. Watch out for changes in tense ‘pastor continues’’ and singular/plural – ‘his boat never returned from their.’ Yeggy.