The Official Writing Challenge
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I can't believe you managed to get all of those wonderful descriptions in with a limit of 750 words. It was great. I could vividly picture every detail. Excellent writing.
Felt like I was in the garage watching all the action. Great writing!
A brilliant story that left me breathless from all the chaotic downfall of cans, cars and shelves! But the word "Eeek" seemed much too low-keyed and out of place at this tremendous douwnpour of metal crashing all around and about; but otherwise, great job, and although a fiasco was was an interesting and enjoyable read...keeping my interest until the very end.
Great job with the details - amusing and harrowing! A great story. (And I do hope it isn't true for you!)
Patricia... super congrats on "highly commended!"