The Official Writing Challenge
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What a delightful story. I liked how you showed how Abby grew. Good job.
03/05/10
This is a lovely story, showing Abby's growth in maturity. It has great dialogue and kept my interest till the very end.
03/05/10
Great analogy of spiritual growth. It also brought back memories of when I was nine and a blue racer snake chased me down the garden path.
03/07/10
Descriptive, humorous and a great title. Nicely done. A story that speaks to me because one of my greatest fears is encountering a snake. I would say I need "maybe just a little more time", but I'm already fifty-two years old - I'm running out of time! ;)