The Official Writing Challenge
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What a delightful story. I liked how you showed how Abby grew. Good job.
This is a lovely story, showing Abby's growth in maturity. It has great dialogue and kept my interest till the very end.
Great analogy of spiritual growth. It also brought back memories of when I was nine and a blue racer snake chased me down the garden path.
Descriptive, humorous and a great title. Nicely done. A story that speaks to me because one of my greatest fears is encountering a snake. I would say I need "maybe just a little more time", but I'm already fifty-two years old - I'm running out of time! ;)