The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
This is a delightful rendition of Joseph's story. I enjoyed every word. You are quite creative, as well as a great writer.
03/04/10
Very creative, well written and with much truth and fun.
03/05/10
One of my very, very favorites this week. With your permission I will use it when telling the children about Joseph and how God uses our trials for our benefit.
03/08/10
This is even better the second read through. You have such talent, every week I'm more and more impressed.
03/08/10
A very enjoyable retelling of a familar story from a different viewpoint.
03/08/10
I hadn't realised the meaning of the name,(until I read the hint) which makes the story even more 'endearing'. Naming the rat after his youngest brother!!! Hope the judges are not as dumb as me!
03/08/10
I loved Benji's viewpoint and adventures, linked in with Joseph's life. Really excellent -- both in the writing and in the creativity angle.
03/09/10
I enjoyed this story from Benji's point of view. :) and with Benji's close acquaintance with Joseph, it will come in handy when Joseph begins to store all that grain. :)
03/11/10
What a clever, creative, well paced and well told story of this great tale from a unique point of view. Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place!
03/11/10
Joan, Joan, Joan . . . what a talented writer you are! How marvelously creative to weave childlike fiction with real-life biblical drama, founded on a timeless message.

Congratulations Joan, on your 1st Place Win; thank you, for entering such pleasurable reading.

Bryan.
03/11/10
Very well done! Congratulations of your well deserved win.

This would make such a delightful childrens book but adults can learn much from it as well.

Great job!
03/11/10
Hey Joan, Super congrats on your ribbon and Editor's Choice!
03/11/10
Wow, this was incredibly creative, loved it from beginning to end! So deserving of first place and your EC, congrats!
03/12/10
I somehow missed this one the first time around. I'm glad I got to read it now. It was such an enjoyable story.