The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story- a very clever mousetrap. I say you should go for the home business. It seems like a brilliant idea.
Very cute! Held my interest all the way through, and brought out the eek in me.
Loved it! Very entertaining and one of the best this week.
Poor Mitzy! Her perseverence paid off, though. You really baited me from the very beginning, and I was delightfully trapped into reading this clear through to the end. And I am so glad I did - it's terrific!
A fun story, with excellent writing. I especially liked the phrase "wide selection of rodent elimination paraphernalia"! Maybe I'll get rid of my D-con boxes and start using your final technique -- it sounds like it's more fun than D-con.
Catchy opening, really drew me in. Ditzy Mitzy sure had some fun, as did I reading through this little gem. Great writing!
Oh my! :) I enjoyed your alliteration with "How dare that vile varmint violate… " :) and another Oh my! What a CLEVER mouse trap! The simplicity of it makes me smile! I love it.. Cute and fun-to-read story! Nice work!
I was so entertained! I always say that 'life' makes the best stories...whether they are humorous or heart-wrenching.