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03/04/10
Very powerful. Your description of the wilderness made me feel like I was there myself. The haunting echo of an empty sky could only mean one thing. I appreciate seeing this horrific day from another POV. You opened my eyes.
03/04/10
A very deep and interesting piece. Well done.
03/05/10
Very powerfully written account. A disturbing thought that as you were soaking in the peace, the foundations of your country were being shaken to the core. My only criticism is that I do not see the topic in your article.
03/06/10
I liked the title, and love the outdoors. You had me at "Cutthroat Trout." Nice analogies.It's easy to remember where we were that morning.

03/11/10
Well written and moving! The contrast here was very effective. The topic is in there, too, but it is subtle, which I see as another strength.