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Very powerful. Your description of the wilderness made me feel like I was there myself. The haunting echo of an empty sky could only mean one thing. I appreciate seeing this horrific day from another POV. You opened my eyes.
03/04/10
A very deep and interesting piece. Well done.
03/05/10
Very powerfully written account. A disturbing thought that as you were soaking in the peace, the foundations of your country were being shaken to the core. My only criticism is that I do not see the topic in your article.
I liked the title, and love the outdoors. You had me at "Cutthroat Trout." Nice analogies.It's easy to remember where we were that morning.

Well written and moving! The contrast here was very effective. The topic is in there, too, but it is subtle, which I see as another strength.