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What a suspenseful story. It really resonated with me as someone broke into my grandma's house when I was little. She managed to get outside, but the man caught up with her and was on top of her when she was saved by the dogs. This story had tears in my eyes, chills down by back and goosebumps on my arms. Very good storytelling. I'm so happy the MC was a quick thinker.
A very well written and suspenseful story, drawing the reader in from begining to end. You also highlight the potentially life saving idea of keeping car keys on the night stand to activate the car's alarm in case of emergency. Extremely well done!
03/07/10
Captivated and held me from beginning to end! You need to write suspense stories. Terrific read!