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You did a great job of transiting a story to a wonderful message from God.
I agree with the above comment. It's what I immediately noticed also -- how smoothly your piece shifted from the personal level to Scriptural, and made your points.
From movie quote to real life mom as mentor, to spiritual application, back to movie...A captivating way to teach scriptural truths applicable to our lives for today. Good work.
I thought this was excellent! You segued seamlessly from personal experience to a nod at The Princess Bride to scripture application. Terrific writing. (Plus, I love that you used The Princess Bride, one of my all-time favorites,that I've seen so many times that I know most of the dialog!)