The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job of transiting a story to a wonderful message from God.
I agree with the above comment. It's what I immediately noticed also -- how smoothly your piece shifted from the personal level to Scriptural, and made your points.
03/05/10
From movie quote to real life mom as mentor, to spiritual application, back to movie...A captivating way to teach scriptural truths applicable to our lives for today. Good work.
03/06/10
I thought this was excellent! You segued seamlessly from personal experience to a nod at The Princess Bride to scripture application. Terrific writing. (Plus, I love that you used The Princess Bride, one of my all-time favorites,that I've seen so many times that I know most of the dialog!)