The Official Writing Challenge
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Been there, done that....
Such a good message in a nice poem. Well done.
You always use excellent (salsa) words in your poetry AND have the smoothest meter! Masterful work, twin! I was there with you through every "Eek!" and loved your ending message!
Such a smooth, rhythmic flow. I was right there with ya!
ALWAYS fantastic. Your poetry is some of my very favorite. :)

Last stanza was perfect.

So enjoyable and encouraging. Thank you.
You did a great job of describing how silly we act at times like that. I liked that you were able to convey the feeling in rhyme too.
Beautifully done, deceptively simple. I'm impressed....
Just so happens I'm reading this during a thunderstorm, now that is talent (on your part). I need to learn that trick. Great poem from one of my favorites. God bless.
Always a master! Loved your story...I've been there too!
As usual, your poetry is wonderful! I need to keep this one in mind as we move into the stormy spring (my least favorite season of the year...). Well done!
Congratulations on the top 40!