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Siblings feelings sure do change over the years. It reminded me of my own brother.I would have loved to hear some more of his antics. But it was a nice description of your title.
Great, honest account of brother and sister. You accomplished making the reader, (me, in this case)wear your shoes of different emotions as a sister. I have four brothers, one being my twin :)
03/07/10
Great little vignette of how your relationship with your brother matured over time. You communicated a lot using fewer words. Shows wise choice of words and concise writing. Very enjoyable read.
03/10/10
I relate to this very well with my five older brothers, especially the one twenty months older than me...lots of memories there! You did well at the end showing just how much relationships can evolve over time ;-) The corn crib??? Eek!
Oh, what memories! I enjoyed the brother/sister relationship you shared. It brought back wonderful memories of my brother.