The Official Writing Challenge
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Touching, well done.
Good story. sorrow and joy. I liked it.
I liked the title more after reading the story. Well written, with a good balance between sorrow and jubilation.
Very touching. Great work!
This was very good! I wonder if it might even have more of a "punch" if you just ended with the words of the postcard, and then let your readers contemplate the irony. Loved your writing style.
Really well done. I loved this! Great work.
Wonderful piece. The one thing that all Christians lament is whether or not an unsaved loved one has given their lives to Christ before they passed away. It brings a sort of comfort to know that they have!
Brenda, I'm only just getting around now the Postcards semi-finalists now, but wanted to make sure that you knew you were right up there in the running. In fact, you placed 10th overall, which is really excellent. This was such a moving entry. Well done (as always). Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)