The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/10
This is a great story. I was thoroughly entertained and laughed when the roaches came poring out. Some of your wording sounded strange to me (pink hearted), but that is no big deal. You told a great story and had me holding my breath for the MC.
03/04/10
Wow. So random but I like this love story.
03/05/10
Great dialogue and action. One of the best this week.
03/11/10
Congratulations on the top 40!