The Official Writing Challenge
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This is genuinely adorable and put a smile on my face.

I know absolutely nothing about poetry but it flowed very smoothly for me as I read it.

I especially liked that it was a true story!
03/04/10
I love this. Covers the topic in great description and homor.
03/04/10
Pardon the typo.. That should be humor.
This is great. I smiled throughout the whole thing. Very vivid details that rhyme- how wonderful.
03/04/10
Simply delightful! The word choices and the rhythm of the poem were so light and airy. It all fit together beautifully.
03/04/10
LOL! Cute story... I could see it all... and how crazy that this actually happened!
03/05/10
Really neat! Cute, rapid and to the point, plus ended in success! Great job, delightful read, super Title and brightened up an overcast and dreary day! (*.*)Thanks!
Enjoyed this much. Might make an excellent illustrated children's book, as well as being fun for adults.
This sure brings back memories and good ones, they are. Good writing.
03/07/10
Oh my goodness, I loved every delightful stanza! SO clever, funny and perfect in almost every way. What hilarious illustrations this would make for a children's picture book. The title is great, also.
03/11/10
I absolutely adore this. WONDERFUL in every way.
03/11/10
Congratulations, friend, on your EC. Great poem, and well deserved.
03/11/10
Lisa, LOVED this. So funny and clever! Great job!
03/11/10
Hey, congrats on your editor's choice award!
03/15/10
Wonderful. I especially liked the line where Dad fell on the laundry hamper-- very creative and cute.
03/17/10
I wish I could write like that. Congrats on your EC.