The Official Writing Challenge
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This is genuinely adorable and put a smile on my face.

I know absolutely nothing about poetry but it flowed very smoothly for me as I read it.

I especially liked that it was a true story!
03/04/10
I love this. Covers the topic in great description and homor.
03/04/10
Pardon the typo.. That should be humor.
This is great. I smiled throughout the whole thing. Very vivid details that rhyme- how wonderful.
03/04/10
Simply delightful! The word choices and the rhythm of the poem were so light and airy. It all fit together beautifully.
03/04/10
LOL! Cute story... I could see it all... and how crazy that this actually happened!
03/05/10
Really neat! Cute, rapid and to the point, plus ended in success! Great job, delightful read, super Title and brightened up an overcast and dreary day! (*.*)Thanks!
Enjoyed this much. Might make an excellent illustrated children's book, as well as being fun for adults.
This sure brings back memories and good ones, they are. Good writing.
Oh my goodness, I loved every delightful stanza! SO clever, funny and perfect in almost every way. What hilarious illustrations this would make for a children's picture book. The title is great, also.
03/11/10
I absolutely adore this. WONDERFUL in every way.
03/11/10
Congratulations, friend, on your EC. Great poem, and well deserved.
03/11/10
Lisa, LOVED this. So funny and clever! Great job!
03/11/10
Hey, congrats on your editor's choice award!
03/15/10
Wonderful. I especially liked the line where Dad fell on the laundry hamper-- very creative and cute.
03/17/10
I wish I could write like that. Congrats on your EC.